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It' so weird to look into her eyes because I know she's not really staring back. That when she looks at me, she's not really seeing me. And somehow it makes me feel better.
I know it's shallow to like the fact that she can't see my scar, but it goes beyond appearance. I don't have to feel like her eyes are judging me. That she doesn't base her recognition of me by my face. Toph sees me in a totally different way than most people.
But sometimes I wish she could see. When I catch her eyes, I wish they were a normal green instead of the weird, but pretty ones they are now. I want to connect with her without having to make a sound or touch her. Not that I don't mind. Toph makes up for her blindness with physical contact.
But it's not to know how she's feeling. Her eyes tell no story besides the obvious one. And that makes it difficult to be with her. With Mai, at least I knew where I stood and when I looked at her I could feel her intense glaze staring back. But with Toph I don't have that luxury. Most of the time I am just guessing.
But I wouldn't give it up for anything. No matter what, I feel like I can be myself around Toph not matter how our eyes look. There is no fear of her staring at me and thinking that I look weird or something.
Toph doesn't need sight to know me and I don't need to look at her eyes to know her.
I know it's shallow to like the fact that she can't see my scar, but it goes beyond appearance. I don't have to feel like her eyes are judging me. That she doesn't base her recognition of me by my face. Toph sees me in a totally different way than most people.
But sometimes I wish she could see. When I catch her eyes, I wish they were a normal green instead of the weird, but pretty ones they are now. I want to connect with her without having to make a sound or touch her. Not that I don't mind. Toph makes up for her blindness with physical contact.
But it's not to know how she's feeling. Her eyes tell no story besides the obvious one. And that makes it difficult to be with her. With Mai, at least I knew where I stood and when I looked at her I could feel her intense glaze staring back. But with Toph I don't have that luxury. Most of the time I am just guessing.
But I wouldn't give it up for anything. No matter what, I feel like I can be myself around Toph not matter how our eyes look. There is no fear of her staring at me and thinking that I look weird or something.
Toph doesn't need sight to know me and I don't need to look at her eyes to know her.
Literature
Just say my name
Today I'm dreaming
your gentle hand
sets my skin on fire
I see myself
like yelling from the top
of Spire rock
and roll
you move my soul
I've never felt so...
weird
half of me is you
and I don't totally know what to do
I just kind of fake it
because eventually I'll make it
but when the sun sets
I have nothing left
to help me forget
that you are away.
Literature
Tell me how
Tell me how
you can cause me
to turn red at a single phrase
Tell me how
you can cause me
to even forget my name.
Tell me how
you can cause me
to trip over my words
Tell me how
you can cause my
heart to be stirred.
Tell me how.
Because m'dear
Literature
The Truth
I think sleeping rough is underrated
When I'm sleeping next to you
I had five plans for university
But no intent of following though
I always say I hate being touched
But when it's you I'm lying
I often say I'm giving up
But for you I'm always trying
You demanded that I say it
Told me to 'pinky promise'
But I've been lying for years
And it's hard to just be honest
When you asked 'what can I do
To make you smile again?'
I'd already asked too much so
I just told you to pray
Because I'm terrified of us
If I tell the truth
Because we're a lot to each other
But you're everything to her
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Next prompt was eyes, which I was looking forward too. I like the idea of writing this prompt since Toph is blind and so doesn't natural use her eyes.
So join and tell me what you think. XD
Toko!
So join and tell me what you think. XD
Toko!
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I love how you can tell who was speaking without saying a name. And that's not just because it was Toko Week.
Another two things. Second paragraph: I suggest using "weird yet pretty" or even "weird-but-pretty" eyes instead of that comma. It threw me off. Also, fifth paragraph, you added a "t" to "no", making it "not".
Sorry for critiquing you. You just seem like someone into writing, and I thought I could help, little by little. Just grammatical stuff.
Another two things. Second paragraph: I suggest using "weird yet pretty" or even "weird-but-pretty" eyes instead of that comma. It threw me off. Also, fifth paragraph, you added a "t" to "no", making it "not".
Sorry for critiquing you. You just seem like someone into writing, and I thought I could help, little by little. Just grammatical stuff.